MY INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
Hello, after my research on how to write a feature article I have started my work. Today I would like to share a piece of my writing which is an introduction paragraph.
Have you ever wondered how your life would look like in the absence of social media?
Over four billion people are active internet users based on research from 2020. Most of them are young people or students. Nowadays it is impossible to get through the day without texting with friends on messenger or adding new photos on Instagram. We live in times of high technology and pandemic. Social media don’t provide us only with entertainment but we can create our own brand, see our family on facetime or make money from views on Youtube. There are many possibilities to get a positive outcome from social networks. Even when we are spending every hour with the phone in the hand, it does not mean we are doing nothing.
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What research are you talking about and where can I find this? Include sources and references in your work. Please add critical reflection on your work here. What is working well? Is there something that can be improved?
ReplyDeleteI see that you did the right structure in the introduction . In addition to the above recommendations, I have nothing to add.
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